Monday, February 25, 2019
Welcome home Hercules (sol19)
My brother had walked out of him room turing his head noticing me on the couch he looked at me saying “ If you want to look at the new dog just go in my room but don’t let him out because he will pee all over they house” as he walked to the bathroom turning his head away from me. I got up quickly moseyed my way to my brothers door gripping the silver doornob connected to the white door as I pushed forward slightly peaking in, as I did I had found I small black dog with a bit of grey fur poking his head out as he looked up I started to stair at his eyes who were black almost as black as night color to them, so was his nose that had looked to be wet. He had started to push threw the door when I realized what my brother had said saying not to let him out. I had put I leg in front of the dog blocking his way while I closed the door, thinking he was so cute and adorable with his face, I had then went back to the spot I was at on the couch thinking to myself about the cute black and grey dog.
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I loved you story, also the dog sounds really cute.
ReplyDeleteI love dogs, thanks for writing about one! You described every moment in such great detail, and love that you used dialog! Pro tip: You need more punctuation - that will make it easier for us readers to understand :-)
ReplyDeleteLove how you were detailed on how your dog looks
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